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Post by Dramatwist on Feb 17, 2018 5:31:58 GMT -5
Strike the match alight
Make sure the sulpher burns off
Touch the tobacco
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Post by briarpipenyc on Feb 17, 2018 8:33:55 GMT -5
Less IS more. 17 syllables too....
Frank
NYC
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Post by cgvt on Feb 17, 2018 9:14:50 GMT -5
Pack the bowl just right. Where is my freaking lighter? Sigh. I found a match  |
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Post by briarpipenyc on Feb 17, 2018 11:01:20 GMT -5
cgtv
17 and done. Nice.
Frank
NYC
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Post by slowroll on Feb 17, 2018 13:44:01 GMT -5
I'll enjoy all your entries; poetry and all its forms are beyond my scrivening skills.
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Post by Legend Lover on Feb 17, 2018 17:38:51 GMT -5
I've never written a haiku before. Here's my attempt...
Pack the bowl too tight
light re-light re-light re-light
pack the bowl looser
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Post by Dramatwist on Feb 17, 2018 17:40:01 GMT -5
I've never written a haiku before. Here's my attempt... Pack the bowl too tight light re-light re-light re-light pack the bowl looser PERFECT! |
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Post by bonanzadriver on Feb 18, 2018 1:28:47 GMT -5
Pack Tight... Abhore Pack Light... Adore For Less... is More.  |
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Post by Dramatwist on Feb 18, 2018 1:30:40 GMT -5
Pack Tight... Abhore Pack Light... Adore For Less... is More. ...I like it... |
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